A poem by Lorne Laliberte
This poem is one of the first I wrote...in fact, it's the second oldest poem that I still have a copy of. I remember starting it while I was bored at my Aunt Rose's in the city, and polishing it a bit for an English assignment later in the year.
The Fox© 1989 Lorne Laliberte A terrible noise this morn did wake The farmer from his dreamy state, To find that, rising with the morn Was chaos in its truest form. For in his chicken coop he spied A fox had found its way inside, And busily was chasing 'bout The chickens, trying to herd them out The hole he'd dug under the gate, This morning or sometime of late. The farmer, fearing for the worst, Ran to the door, and loudly cursed: "Thieving fox, when I am through, It will be the end for you!" He then came out, loading his gun, Of all his chickens, only one Remained inside the wire fence (All the rest had gone long since). The fox was quite cunning, indeed, But in his heart there was no greed. He pushed the last bird through the hole, And then proclaimed with all his soul: "My feathered friends, you are now free, To live your life as it should be, Outside the jails that man does make For animals he cares to take Without requesting their consent, Or recognizing their dissent!" But the farmer did not hear These sounds unsuited to his ear, And shot the fox, but did not see, How much the fox was freer than he. |
I like the way the pacing of this poem sets the reader off before the message at the end. I know I didn't plan it consciously but it seems to give the last stanza more weight. Maybe allowing the reader to believe the poem is "light" because of its vitesse adds just enough shock value to the ending? The reader is a little bit less prepared, and feels the impact a little bit greater.
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