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Horse and War

Two unfinished short story openings by Lorne Laliberte

Foreword:

I came across these two openings recently in my ideas drawer. They're an interesting pair of story seeds. The first one, Horse, is the beginning of a fantasy story, which I seem to remember had something to do with a priest masquerading as a knight to bluff his way across a dangerous land.

The second one, War, was scribbled on a page of notes for an invasion of Canada story, something my cousins and I role-played at great length as children.

Horse

© 1989 Lorne Laliberte

"I said get off that horse," the voice repeated, "and I meant get off that horse now."

I peered into the bushes about me but still could not determine the source of my troubles. Nor, for that matter, had I any way of knowing what number of compagnions this stranger could have. "What man would order another to dismount without revealing his face?"

"A man who prefers to remain unseen so long as you remain mounted."

"I can hardly commend you for your manners, sir, but since I must pass, so be it." I dismounted, but held the reins tightly.

"State your business."

I considered that question carefully. Would it be unwise to reveal my true identity? "I am on

[Unfinished is right! I didn't even finish the sentence.]



War

© 1989 Lorne Laliberte

"Look! Over there!"

I dropped to the ground and tried to remember what I'd seen. Men - soldiers, two, maybe more behind the barn or at the house or near the corral. But at least two, both armed, one with a gun and the other with I-don't-know what, green uniforms or black - probably Americans, Quebeckers wouldn't have yelled in English, not without an accent. Americans, then, and that meant really armed.

Afterword:

The first one is closer to being an actual opening; War doesn't read very solid at all. I'm mostly fond of War for the last sentence. :)



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